Thursday, January 29, 2009

Peer Reviews

Today I read Brad Miller's paper and Katie Sharpe's paper. Brad's paper showed how the influence of Muhammad Ali can really push a company's products to success because of how the audience views his status as the greats athlete of all time. He told me that I need to have a title in my own paper.
Reading Katie's paper about children watching too much of the wrong things on TV showed me how easily children are influenced and how an inappropriate show might emotionally scar a child for life. Parents need to monitor their children and make sure they do not watch too much TV. She told me I need to have a conclusion with a closing sentence.

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